HarryWeezer

Too many minor grammatical errors to list - you'll need an editor to go through your manuscript before you submit it. You write very well. There is a nice flow and construction to your prose with good use of adjectives - but not overuse. I've read much published work that is not as captivating and appealing. You appear to have a nice story line going and obviously have outlined these chapters and have done a very good job of fleshing them out. An editor will suggest some mior style rewrite but all-in-all, this shows great promise and if the entire book is as well done, I'd say you'll have no trouble finding a publisher. The genre is certainly popular. Good luck!

That FT crap is for wussies. Get yer arse back to DM. Welcome!!

Welcome treadd, and please pay no attention to the previous poster, who empties the trash at XI Corporate, and is an illegal alien with a mental deficiency.

Into every Idiot server, a little Raiin should fall. Welcome

Honey Badger for XI admin cause he's badass and doesn't give a shit.

Happy birthday to you. Happy birthday to you. Happy bir...acckk, cough, cough... Sorry, I'm a bit out of tune today. But hope you have a great one.

Chile: LOVE your sig!!!!! Who made it?

Heh heh - spent an hour yesterday watching all the Harry Enfield vids that you'll see at the end of these. Worth your time...

So sorry to hear...

I so love British humor. A shame Fawlty Towers only went one season - Cleese is a genius as was Bennie Hill (who had the hottest chicks.)

Wonderful news!!!

Isn't that a personal attack ? ARE YOU A MEMBER?..NOPE..YOU HAD YOUR OWN ISSUES WITH US..YOUR OPINION DONT MATTER HERE.. Isn't THAT a personal attack? You betcha!!!

Isn't that a personal attack ? Not if you're an idiot. And we're all idiots.

A reward - Rugger's personal blow-up doll - has now been posted for information leading to the recovery of our medals and the chat box.

Thinking of you - so sorry...

I'll have Jack and Coke with my Ice.

Ahhh, fresh meat. Keep your head down, your powder dry, and your dick in the dirt. I've sent invites to all of you to join the clan Xfire. WELCOME!!!

Heh heh - I've been known to do stuff like that.

Enough of these extended vacations. Get back to your desk, and get to work. Oh, and WELCOME BACK!!!!!

Welcome aboard - don't be too late for the servers. I've sent you an invite to join the clan's Xfire group.

For the past 7-8 years, I've played all FPS with the Panther XL. And I'm usually in the top 2-3. HXTR, that "other" joystick is still an analog device and so doesn't work well anymore.l

Spent two years at McConnell AFB, Wichita (volunteered for Vietnam to get out of there) in the late '60s and it was totally dry. You joined a private club, kept your booze in your car trunk, and then brought it into the club and paid for setups. This was a shocker for a kid from NY where at that time you could drink at 18. When I got to Kingsport, TN 28 years ago it was dry. Finally got liquor by the drink, which passed by ONE vote. At that point, the city took off with restaurants, etc. But the religious fanatics here in the Bible Belt still preach against the "devil's brew." And so it goes...

Alienware Aurora R2 i5 @ 2,67GHz, 8GB, dual 1TB, dual GeForct GTX 460s SLI, 28" HannsG monitor, 5.1 Logitech surround, Panther XL analog joystick converted to full digital with keyboard emulation.