BigPapaDean Posted January 7, 2012 Member ID: 1128 Group: ***- Inactive Clan Members Followers: 78 Topic Count: 1210 Topics Per Day: 0.22 Content Count: 6553 Content Per Day: 1.18 Reputation: 4430 Achievement Points: 63653 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 6 Joined: 02/13/10 Status: Offline Last Seen: March 18 Birthday: 10/21/1954 Device: Windows Posted January 7, 2012 As a child growing up I was seemingly gifted with an ability to use descriptive terms so people could instantly visualize anything I wanted to be very clear on of what I was saying! When I was in my senior year of high school I took a creative writing class and very rarely did any of the assignments but the alternative was to write a poem instead! I wrote one on a morning when everything seemed to be going wrong and I was rushed , in about 2 minutes! The instructor made a comment in big red letters when he handed it back "This took a lot of time and effort!" I laughed but kept quiet! These days most of you know my situation, but I never told you I met someone who I have developed an intense relationship with. A couple months ago I sit down and wrote the following poem depicting my search for her! She is beautiful and very loyal and also to my surprise which she didn't tell me when we met was she is also quite wealthy! When she told me that I told her I didn't want her money but I was after her heart! She just smiled and told me she trusts me with her life! I was WOW. I have never been told me that before! Anyway the poem. Enjoy! She told me she cried when she read this! THE DEEP RED ROSE!!! As I walk through my garden of beautiful flowers, there are blooms of red, white and blue. There are yellow, pink and purple and like the rainbow many flowers of a variety of hues. Every one of them are beautiful and lovely each in there own right but none, no none of those Had the appeal and the aroma as the most magically alluring of all flowers my dark red rose! I have looked both high and low, over mountain and in the deep set f island coves Never to find the flower that steals my heart and draws me to it like cooing doves. Then on one delightful morn just as I was about ready to concede in my search There in the valley on a knoll I espied her sitting there like a canary on her perch. And the song she sang was so beautiful to my longing ears of my heart I cried. Because there was the sound in my ears of my heart, but I thought it had died. To my amazement this beauty that few eyes have ever seen was my deep red rose. I was afraid to touch her lest I slay the moment then she cried, Take me and heaven knows I have been here all these long lonely years waiting for you to come and free me from my roots And give me my freedom to experience what you have to give to me the love of loves. Now we can fly away forever more you and me on the wings of white love doves. I have no want or need of pleasure or sensations as you give me it all with a single touch. Your breath gives me life I had lost and your beauty has my heart in awe just as much. I wake in the morn and the first thing I do is feel to see if you are definetly, undisputebly real Because of you I am alive in my soul again and this wonderful love I again am able to feel. Love is a fleeting emotion but when its spirit bound it grows and adheres to each heart So that the two hearts beating unite to become one in mind, body, and soul. Awards
Bushape Posted January 7, 2012 Member ID: 839 Group: ***- Inactive Clan Members Followers: 18 Topic Count: 83 Topics Per Day: 0.01 Content Count: 1334 Content Per Day: 0.24 Reputation: 64 Achievement Points: 7776 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 0 Joined: 12/05/09 Status: Offline Last Seen: August 12, 2020 Birthday: 07/17/1958 Posted January 7, 2012 Damn Dean we never knew that there was a nice side to you. lol Pretty touching and nice, thanks. Awards
Milky Posted January 7, 2012 Member ID: 1786 Group: ***- Inactive Clan Members Followers: 37 Topic Count: 133 Topics Per Day: 0.02 Content Count: 1062 Content Per Day: 0.20 Reputation: 729 Achievement Points: 7865 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 2 Joined: 09/11/10 Status: Offline Last Seen: November 28, 2023 Birthday: 07/21/1985 Posted January 7, 2012 Where is the like button..?? Wow.. Awards
ChknFngr Posted January 7, 2012 Member ID: 922 Group: ***- Inactive Clan Members Followers: 72 Topic Count: 149 Topics Per Day: 0.03 Content Count: 3472 Content Per Day: 0.62 Reputation: 1286 Achievement Points: 23224 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 1 Joined: 12/23/09 Status: Offline Last Seen: November 16, 2021 Birthday: 10/01/1975 Posted January 7, 2012 Milky Where is the like button..?? Wow.. +1000 i was hoping to see that button too. Awards
Giggles Posted January 7, 2012 Member ID: 1217 Group: *** Clan Members Followers: 73 Topic Count: 94 Topics Per Day: 0.02 Content Count: 1608 Content Per Day: 0.29 Reputation: 1865 Achievement Points: 14709 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 3 Joined: 03/04/10 Status: Offline Last Seen: April 19 Birthday: 01/21/1978 Device: Android Posted January 7, 2012 My dear friend that was a very touching poem and I must say you have a way with words .....I am still proud to call you my friend ...Love ya Mel Awards
BigPapaDean Posted January 7, 2012 Member ID: 1128 Group: ***- Inactive Clan Members Followers: 78 Topic Count: 1210 Topics Per Day: 0.22 Content Count: 6553 Content Per Day: 1.18 Reputation: 4430 Achievement Points: 63653 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 6 Joined: 02/13/10 Status: Offline Last Seen: March 18 Birthday: 10/21/1954 Device: Windows Author Posted January 7, 2012 The weird thing about this guys is it took me all of 15 minutes to write it! I just seem to be gifted and I am thankful for it! Awards
hxtr Posted January 7, 2012 Member ID: 220 Group: **- Inactive Registered Users Followers: 147 Topic Count: 595 Topics Per Day: 0.10 Content Count: 16950 Content Per Day: 2.96 Reputation: 13538 Achievement Points: 129714 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 120 Joined: 09/04/09 Status: Offline Last Seen: October 26, 2023 Birthday: 04/05/1970 Posted January 7, 2012 so glad I did not see what I thought reading the topic title. lol dean your a good guy. we know a bit about one another through comments and so forth plus other. But if your write a book again... get it published. I want the audio version. hahahahahaha lol hahahahaha Peace Brother!
hxtr Posted January 7, 2012 Member ID: 220 Group: **- Inactive Registered Users Followers: 147 Topic Count: 595 Topics Per Day: 0.10 Content Count: 16950 Content Per Day: 2.96 Reputation: 13538 Achievement Points: 129714 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 120 Joined: 09/04/09 Status: Offline Last Seen: October 26, 2023 Birthday: 04/05/1970 Posted January 7, 2012 ok now I will read what you have to say.
Sweatnbullets Posted January 7, 2012 Member ID: 213 Group: ***- Inactive Clan Members Followers: 11 Topic Count: 61 Topics Per Day: 0.01 Content Count: 820 Content Per Day: 0.14 Reputation: 521 Achievement Points: 5654 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 0 Joined: 09/03/09 Status: Offline Last Seen: March 16 Birthday: 06/06/1963 Device: Windows Posted January 7, 2012 Even Idiots have a talent, and your list does include poetry, nice work Awards
my_slave Posted January 7, 2012 Member ID: 1186 Group: ***- Inactive Clan Members Followers: 42 Topic Count: 11 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 284 Content Per Day: 0.05 Reputation: 114 Achievement Points: 2038 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 0 Joined: 02/25/10 Status: Offline Last Seen: March 1 Birthday: 09/12/1982 Device: iPhone Posted January 7, 2012 that was PRETTY, i got goosebumps, thank you very much for sharing!! I wish you both the best in life witch is LOVE and wait what is the other thing? oh ya i remember LOVE :-) Awards
Olive Posted January 7, 2012 Member ID: 69 Group: *** Clan Members Followers: 50 Topic Count: 227 Topics Per Day: 0.04 Content Count: 2664 Content Per Day: 0.47 Reputation: 4132 Achievement Points: 23009 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 19 Joined: 09/02/09 Status: Offline Last Seen: Thursday at 05:20 PM Birthday: 05/07/1965 Device: Windows Posted January 7, 2012 Nice Dean ! Awards
WeednFeed Posted January 7, 2012 Member ID: 433 Group: ++ COD4 Admin Followers: 42 Topic Count: 365 Topics Per Day: 0.06 Content Count: 2637 Content Per Day: 0.46 Reputation: 4218 Achievement Points: 26689 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 48 Joined: 09/17/09 Status: Offline Last Seen: 10 hours ago Birthday: 05/28/1957 Device: iPhone Posted January 7, 2012 You aren't so MEAN after all! Nice words Dean. Weed Awards
hxtr Posted January 7, 2012 Member ID: 220 Group: **- Inactive Registered Users Followers: 147 Topic Count: 595 Topics Per Day: 0.10 Content Count: 16950 Content Per Day: 2.96 Reputation: 13538 Achievement Points: 129714 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 120 Joined: 09/04/09 Status: Offline Last Seen: October 26, 2023 Birthday: 04/05/1970 Posted January 7, 2012 nice dean............ Poetry is fun to write. Takes a subject. And the one you choose is a great thing bro. Love is so great......... like friendship. It matters......... lots. When you find what you are looking for....... makes things so much better. Anyone seen my keys? Yea can we get a like button.. lol
simplemod Posted January 8, 2012 Member ID: 623 Group: **- Inactive Registered Users Followers: 21 Topic Count: 62 Topics Per Day: 0.01 Content Count: 1072 Content Per Day: 0.19 Reputation: 417 Achievement Points: 7809 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 1 Joined: 10/24/09 Status: Offline Last Seen: January 27, 2018 Birthday: 10/26/1982 Posted January 8, 2012 nice Dean.
WarDragonXI Posted January 8, 2012 Member ID: 257 Group: ***- Inactive Clan Members Followers: 19 Topic Count: 13 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 280 Content Per Day: 0.05 Reputation: 45 Achievement Points: 1673 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 0 Joined: 09/05/09 Status: Offline Last Seen: July 27, 2023 Birthday: 10/02/1950 Posted January 8, 2012 Congratulations on finding your Rose Dean and I hope everything works out for the best for you and her. Awards
PimpedOutPete Posted January 8, 2012 Member ID: 174 Group: +++ COD2 Head Admin Followers: 130 Topic Count: 387 Topics Per Day: 0.07 Content Count: 15027 Content Per Day: 2.63 Reputation: 8042 Achievement Points: 92205 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 59 Joined: 09/02/09 Status: Offline Last Seen: 1 hour ago Birthday: 04/23/1970 Device: Macintosh Posted January 8, 2012 Awards
Ferret Posted January 8, 2012 Member ID: 859 Group: **- Inactive Registered Users Followers: 6 Topic Count: 69 Topics Per Day: 0.01 Content Count: 681 Content Per Day: 0.12 Reputation: 10 Achievement Points: 4117 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 0 Joined: 12/09/09 Status: Offline Last Seen: August 9, 2014 Birthday: 11/04/1968 Posted January 8, 2012 Glad to see you can express yourself with something other than that damn knife on COD4, lol. Very nice, sir. You do have a gift.
Joe Canadian Posted January 8, 2012 Member ID: 822 Group: ***- Inactive Clan Members Followers: 87 Topic Count: 317 Topics Per Day: 0.06 Content Count: 5477 Content Per Day: 0.97 Reputation: 5025 Achievement Points: 42632 Solved Content: 0 Days Won: 20 Joined: 12/02/09 Status: Offline Last Seen: October 25, 2023 Birthday: 03/01/1967 Posted January 8, 2012 Very nice Dean Awards
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